tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5123631695572626256.post3914147701202836027..comments2024-03-28T12:03:34.366+00:00Comments on Shadows & Light: Three Mediocre College PoemsSteve Reedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11684120060438252945noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5123631695572626256.post-78101372557857011392012-08-06T12:00:36.874+01:002012-08-06T12:00:36.874+01:00I loved all three! You should really do more of th...I loved all three! You should really do more of these.Lynnehttp://www.rickandlynne.com/lynnenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5123631695572626256.post-20761668623806053342012-08-04T07:14:36.856+01:002012-08-04T07:14:36.856+01:00Thanks for the feedback, everybody! It's so fu...Thanks for the feedback, everybody! It's so funny to go back and look at something you wrote a long time ago. It doesn't even seem like it's yours, you know? In some ways it's not, thanks to age and life experience.<br /><br />Linda Sue, I haven't written a haiku in years and years. Maybe I should give it a whirl one of these days!Steve Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11684120060438252945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5123631695572626256.post-66010117906307831012012-08-03T19:18:19.191+01:002012-08-03T19:18:19.191+01:00LOVE love LOVE! All three! Of course I am partial ...LOVE love LOVE! All three! Of course I am partial to Haiku and that one hits me right in the middle- So accurate and simple- universal. I do hope that you have continued writing Haiku. Excellent! Made my day!Linda Suehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03070050388987072100noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5123631695572626256.post-8488432566053322332012-08-03T14:14:24.774+01:002012-08-03T14:14:24.774+01:00I smiled too, remembering those days...The haiku i...I smiled too, remembering those days...The haiku is my favourite.ehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11376645220662546020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5123631695572626256.post-67668818140128623792012-08-03T14:00:52.716+01:002012-08-03T14:00:52.716+01:00I like the haiku too, but this made me sizzle:
An...I like the haiku too, but this made me sizzle:<br /><br />And stroked with soap,<br />Clean again and<br />Upon one another.<br /><br />:)The Bughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5123631695572626256.post-5492656951957022542012-08-03T12:51:22.801+01:002012-08-03T12:51:22.801+01:00I really especially love the haiku. Who hasn't...I really especially love the haiku. Who hasn't felt that? You made a poem of it.Ms. Moonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09776404747858099919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5123631695572626256.post-46406351952256662092012-08-03T07:01:46.816+01:002012-08-03T07:01:46.816+01:00The last one made me smile -- I can see you as a v...The last one made me smile -- I can see you as a very young man, writing that. <br /><br />Bravo.Elizabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03313726816776097840noreply@blogger.com